Police + Star wars|

[lordocelot]

late at night guzzling soda and eating candy and listening to the police, a parody came to me in a matter of minutes to one of their songs "wrapped around their finger" (great song) in which i used the plot for the 3rd movie to fill in the verses. Now some of the rhymes are imperfect and if you don't like it, well don't read it. Might it suck? Probably since i didn't think it out. Just basically me on a caffeine high, and since no one has added anything to this site in about a week i thought, 'what the hell, who really cares' post your replys if you like it. Ahem, ahem here it is! BTW Police and star wars both rock!

"I'm wrapped around his finger"
They consider me their young apprentice
Caught between Kenobi and Sidious
Lured by the power of the sith
While the lies of the Jedi begin to form a riff

Forcing me to spy on my friend
Where he then tells me that the Jedi's corruption has no end
Falling deeper into darkness and despair
The Jedi i was is no longer there

I tell myself that this is all for my wife
But in my heart I begin to love this new dark life
Skywalker is no longer my name
By my saber many jedi were slain

Wife on the ground and my friend in front of me
Both of which cant comprehend that with the darkside i am free
Body being burned by fire
There is always a price for your selfish desires

-Fin

[JKrew]

Hahaha. When I first read police and Star Wars, I first though of the Star Wars Cops though. If anyone here hasn't seen that, watch it on youtube.

[Ayin Tsade]

Very good. The beginning part doesn't rhyme, you're right, but for a spontaneous parody this is really good. "The Jedi I was is no longer there" is possibly the coolest line of them all, though fire usually tops it regardless.

Suggestions: shorten some lines to make them flow easier. ex: "Where he then tells me that the Jedi's corruption has no end"

to

"He tells me the Jedi's corruption has no end."

I don't know how the song goes so maybe those lines are really long and you are just matching those. But if this was sheer poetry, that would be my suggestion.

Why don't we rewrite this together sometime? It would be awesome in a signature, and we can make it even better.

[Swil Kit Fisto]

I think i shed a couple tears there, it was beautiful.